Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllll naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww! 101/10 would wife.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww heeeeeeeeeeeellllllllllllllllll naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww! 101/10 would wife.
sarcasm?
O.o - extreme
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w00t?!?!?! MIND BLOWN.
Is this positive or sarcasm? :p
Now this I can fap to...
hell yea!!! thanx bro
-Neon
Get that good nut brah!!!
-Doc
What in the BLUE HELL?!?!?
Agreed with Other Guy
I think I sort of Agree with Petertos. From 00:55 onward the orchestration feels nice and full, though, kind of wish that the percussion had a bit more kick to it (not the timpani segments).
Hi! Thanks for your review!
I will try to do some changes soon, and I will remember your suggestion! :)
lol
If it weren't for the title I probably wouldn't be laughing at the moment...
I WOULD BE WORRIED IF YOU WERENT LAUGHING DUE TO THE TITLE
WORRIED AND CONCERNED
Check that first bass note/line
The first measure, the bass sounds out of tune. Other than that, these four measures aren't bad.
Okie dokie artichokie c: -teehee-
will do c:
it's not close to done yet so I'm just slowly working on it! Thanks for looking/listening. c:
Notation = Good; Instrumentation = (?)
I feel like this belongs in an episode of House. What I'd actually suggest is changing the instruments you're using for the opening lead... sounds like a sort of lame brass synth. The other synth that comes in at 00:34 just doesn't sound all that great either.
The atmosphere you're posing here is quite nice and the notation is superb, but I just feel those instruments chosen contrast it too much. Just an experimental suggestion, try seeing if making the drums at 2:00 hollow sounding like in the intro... maybe it'll sound badass. I dunno. Just a thought.
But yea, that's about as constructive as I can get at this point...
Thanks man.
Yeah, I never thought the instruments really fitted together, but every time I tried to change it, I would end up ruining it. I probably didn't try hard enough though.
Thanks for actually bothering to suggest ways to improve it; you know what most people are like on newgrounds.
And House music is pretty cool. I'm flattered :D
Thanks again, man.
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