Coolness
I loved the entourage off randomness he goes off on about how he'd "rather do... etc., etc.".
The ending was "meh", but good effort regardless.
Coolness
I loved the entourage off randomness he goes off on about how he'd "rather do... etc., etc.".
The ending was "meh", but good effort regardless.
Nice work
Well, you said this was your first - and I'll be honest and say that is a pretty good "first", not to mention a decent sampling. As an overall flash it's not that great b/c it's just a sample and there's no audio, however. Keep it up and you'll progress, since you seem to be a good artist. Looking forward to a complete piece.
If u ever need a composer, drop a line. I like your potential.
Cool
Graphically it was smooth and well-done. I also liked the action. It was a little lacking in the sound department and the concept isn't entirely original... but overall good-job.
Cool
The humor wasn't THAT epic, but I must admit fail number seven was good in my books. Nice job overall. I docked some points for the fact that the concept of a Mario sprite parody isn't really that original and some parts could've been funnier.
Good job, though!
Good start.
Not a bad sample of animation by any means. The lack of audio and everything else is kinda bad, however. What is nice about this piece, though, is that it shows you have some skill. So get to it already, and put a more polished piece together. =P
Yes, i will, but as i only had 14 days trial, (not that this too k 14 days, maybe more like 3 hours), Ill make a better, longer, piece. IF i get the money for the full program. when i do, i promise ill make more ^_^
Good Job
LMAO @ the TV helpers and the can opening. Audio and voice acting seemed a little "meh" at times.
Incredible Job
No words need to be said. This is absolutely amazing.
Hmmm...
Well, the flash is not bad - but the humor here presented wasn't all that impressive. It really lacked in the audio department with quality at that. It needed some music, or even yet - some simple voicing acting of some kind.
Cool
The animation was pretty good and so was most of the dialogue. I had a few laughs - most noticeably the "I can lift things with my hands" part. Haha, such retards.
I docked points mainly b/c the audio quality of what sounded like MIDI tunes was awkwardly bad and there wasn't much to the overall plot. Cool work, though,
As long as you found it funny, I'm content.
Plot was a (quite obviously) last minute thing, and there's no excuses for all the audio.
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